Monday, October 17, 2011

The Best NFL Rookie 2011



            I am writing to convince my audience that Cam Newton is the best NFL rookie in 2011. My reasons are he broke eight NFL records his first three regular season games. He also has a lot of potential. Also in collage while Cam Newton was attending Auburn he won the Heisman Trophy.

My first reason is that in his first three games he broke eight NFL records in his first three regular season games. One of the records was first rookie in NFL history to pass for more than 400 yards in first career start. That is pretty impressive for a rookie from my point of view.

My second reason is that he has a lot of potential as an NFL quarterback. Cam Newton I don’t think will ever be a free agent in the NFL because he has outstanding arm strength. Also he has the ability to move around in the pocket. He can also throw while he is on the run which is very effective when you’re being chased down by a defender in the pocket.

My third and final reason is that in the regular season he already has 1,610 passing yards and seven passing touchdowns. Also he has 160 yards rushing and five rushing touchdowns. He also threw for 422 yards vs. the Packer’s defense. Cam Newton is also the third best quarterback behind Aaron Rodgers and Drew Brees.

I believe Cam Newton is the best NFL rookie in 2011 because in his first three regular season games in the NFL he broke eight records. Cam Newton also won the Heisman Trophy while he was attending Auburn University. Also he threw for 422 yards against the Green Bay Packers which had the number 1 defense in 2010. Lastly I believe that he has a bright future as a quarterback in the NFL because he has a lot of potential.

Monday, October 3, 2011

Gym Candy By Carl Deuker


Gym Candy by Carl Deuker
Author’s Note: This is a letter from a fan to Mick in the book “Gym Candy.” What was the purpose to pull the gun out on Drew at the end of the story? Also, why did the author cut off the book?

            I chose this book because out of all the books I’ve ever read, Gym Candy is my favorite. Gym Candy is about a freshman named Mick Johnson. Mick wants to be a starter for the varsity football team his freshman year.  But when he makes a mistake that causes his team there spot in the playoffs he makes the worst decision in his life.

Mick Johnson has been training since he was four with his dad. This freshman running back will do anything to be starting on the varsity football team. In practice he works harder than everybody. He knows the game better than his competition. But when all of his hard work goes to waste in a game that causes them their spot in the playoffs.

He starts the summer determined to do something different. He hits the gym every day. But when his trainer offers to sell him pills guaranteed to enhance his performance. Thinking about what happened last year, when they lost the game, he buys them. At first, Mick isn’t sure about how he feels taking steroids, but by the time training camp rolls around, one thing is certain, the pills work.

Mike makes the starting team on varsity his sophomore year, and stops using the steroids before the season starts. In his first two games, Mick breaks a string of school records. Then he follows with three alright games. Suddenly a freshman Dave Kane starts to show Mick up in practice. Afraid of losing everything he did over the summer, he starts taking the steroids once again; only this time he takes a stronger dose that heightens the chance of roid rage and depression.

Mick‘s team had to play their last game before the playoffs. Both teams are undefeated and this is the same team that ruined their chances last year to get into the playoffs. This time they made it to the playoffs. When Mick got home he dumped his duffel bag out, but couldn’t find the steroids. Then suddenly the phone rang, It was Drew.

Drew went into Mick’s bag and took the steroids. They met up at the park at one in the morning. Mick says “what are you planning on doing?” Drew says “the only thing I can do, tell coach.” “Don’t do it, Drew.” Mick replies. Mick reaches in his pocket and grabs a hold of something. He feels the metallic coldness of the gun. Drew starts walking back to the car. Mick yells “Drew. Stop” Drew turns around. Mick pulls out the revolver and points it right at Drew.